How much technical detail should stay in the story?
Keep enough technical detail to prove the platform is credible, but do not make every buyer process it before they understand the value. Lead with the outcome, then offer layered content so people can move from a simple explanation to architecture, security, performance or implementation detail as their role requires.
Technical language should earn its place. Product names and essential specialist terms may need to remain, but unnecessary jargon can be replaced with everyday language. Short words, short sentences and an active structure make complex ideas easier to scan. The core story should answer what changes for the buyer, why it matters and how the offer differs. Technical proof then supports that claim rather than burying it.
Sources: Cut the jargon. The best B2B writing is plain and simple